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Surrender To My Heart

You are my whole world, I dream of being your girl. You cause me to smile from within. I'm hoping that our love story can begin. I love the way you make me feel, I know in my heart you are the real deal. I crave for our heart to become one. My love just surrender to the heart you've won. But you will forever see me as a friend. I will remain silent and keep my love at bay, because I don't want our friendship to end. Alexis Y. 2-9-16

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Date: 12/14/2022 2:37:00 AM
Enjoyed this charming love poem.
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Date: 12/14/2022 12:12:00 AM
Shift from platonic to romantic is tricky, unless both feel the same way. Love your poem, Alexis, beautifully penned
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Date: 12/13/2022 12:45:00 AM
yes, just lovely written; I enjoyed
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Date: 10/27/2016 2:49:00 PM
A bittersweet yet poignant poem, Alexis. That's how love goes sometimes. You framed it up very well. You and me are kindred spirits ... romantics at heart. I really love your style of poetry. It moves me deeply. Ty for sharing. Love and more love to you and yours. RW
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Date: 2/9/2016 12:15:00 PM
- Lovely written, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2016 8:53:00 AM
Very nice, Alexis.
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