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Surrender To Me

I see thy broken heart bleed, wet upon thy face. The sorrow of thy heart finds echo in mine. Will love once more breathe its awakening breath? I beg of thee, allow me to reclaim thy wounded heart, oh yield your love to me! Can true love yet tempt thee from the sorrows of thy heart? My dearest love, teach me the words to thy heart’s song that I may woo thee with love’s sweetest melody. Turn thy thoughts from heartache and pain, and surrender to my offering. Written by:Lori McClure contest: two to fourteen/ Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/13/2011 8:49:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's sponsored contest Lori. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:51:00 PM
Congrats Lori on outstanding first place win with this incredible entry for the contest.. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 10/8/2011 5:41:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “That's The Same Thing That Bathsheba Said to David After She Had Plotted to Seduce Him By Bathing & Knowing That He Would Be Watching *^_#* Yet, David Needed A Bit More Tuning Up So, His *Glorious Father In Heaven, Let It Be.... ~ I Love This Painting With The Thought That Anything Spoken Amid The Depths of Sincerities Love, Tis Beautiful My Dear, Precious & Priceless Lori! *^_^* And, Thank You, for Your Beauties Sweeet Visit!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *
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Date: 10/7/2011 7:22:00 AM
Lori , beautiful sentiment, well written with the third line my favourite. Thank you for your comment on Earthbound Angels ,I witnessed this ,unfortunately the sweet lady died the next night. Anne
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