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Surrender

in my dream he waits- I feel his yearning his hunger and I dread it yet it enthralls me to surrender- sensing him (in my darkened room) confusion fear overwhelms he is breathing close so near who is there a shadow moves whispering my name my name whispering terrifying a voice deep baritone demanding and cruel (and then) I see him his fathomless dark eyes staring down at me I am lost yet I pull him close he strokes my flowing hair but his eyes are cold as ice daggers to my soul there is love (hate) lust passion he wants to control me violently crushing my (ruby red) lips obsession his lips release their tension then his kisses are like flowers of love (he is evil) he is love he is lust he is cruel I murmur words of passion oh those dark fathomless eyes go away come back I love you hate you he wraps his arms around me (gentle) and I am lost twirling and swirling oh why does he haunt me my dream is fading fading in the mist and I am screaming for him (don't leave me) oh moon your light is failing you are nothing now and dawn breaks like a wound that bleeds gone and I am left weeping weeping and this dreams of a ghost must hide away be locked away and the wind is whistling in the weeping willows birds are chirping and the sun is creeping _________________________________ July 23, 2015 Free Verse Written by Broken Wings For the contest, Your Best Free Verse, sponsor Skat Seventh Place

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Date: 7/27/2015 11:17:00 PM
And back again wid big congrats on ur wonderful win BW!
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:22:00 PM
Well BW, this certainly REVS up the REM sleep....with dreams like this reality must be sitting alone in a corner weeping.....
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations Constance on your wonderful win!
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Date: 7/25/2015 11:09:00 PM
Simply love this awesome poem. Congrats on your win my friend! A7 Adding this romantic gem to my fav list here.
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:56:00 PM
Broken. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:54:00 AM
Wow! I can see why you chose this one.
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:40:00 AM
Fantastic write BW, gl in contest!
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:29:00 PM
Constance, I love the word surrender as this for me doesn't mean weakness or failure but it also somehow means trust... You bring all my senses in double work to the imagery, feelings and sounds you all featured here! Love the arrangement and the way you powerfully cut those phrases, intensifying your poem!~Olive Eloisa =')
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