Surreal Realism

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Written, December 02, 2023

Poetry/Suzette Prime/Surreal Reality
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1601-960-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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my dreams have always been of flowers and birds in a garden fairytale but life is no fantasy it is full of tears sometimes, I will hang my head like a dying flower at times, I will flutter with joy like a butterfly can dream a real nightmare or a beautiful garden born with imagination when my life is falling to pieces since a girl I just retreat into fantasy safe and protected my words are weapons but like a flower my beauty, also

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 4:12:00 PM

perfect title...this poem was dreamy and a bit surreal while at the time seeming real...not an easy accomplishment. You did so masterfully. I liked the ending...words can be weaponized or used for beauty...profound and true. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2023 6:33:00 AM

Sara, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, and compliment, appreciate a lot