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In my realm of surreal dreams, our love grows. 'Twas a serendipitous dance of chance With one look, our eyes locked and thoughts froze. Soon entwined as in a hypnotic trance Whispers from our universe guided moves And lead us to this meeting of our two souls. Surely our love from the One above approves. Where time stood still and love our only goal On the backside of this surreal tapestry We find ourselves lost in loves wonder. This serendipitous gift to live happily. Anticipating our life of thunder We cherished each moment and glorious feeling. Through the chaos of life, we've had healing Not a contest entry. The main purpose of a couple marrying is to help each other heal and become whole. We have not completed our task.

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Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2024 11:01:00 PM

This is a sonnet that extols the sanctity and ideal of marital love. A husband and wife should grow in love every day. In sickness and old age, they should be a prop to each other. The whole poem is so appealing in its depth and beauty of rhyming. Into my FAVE.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/11/2024 3:12:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. I am honored that you would fav it. Being married isn't easy and it is hard work on the part of both people. Of course, mostly it is every day the same love and understanding but the rough patches do come. Your visit is encouaging. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 3/4/2024 6:50:00 AM

Through chaos of life we’ve found healing, i love that, and also the very creative rhymes throughout. So well expressed and delivered dear sara. And i agree, any sort of relationship should work that way, sickness and health, good times and bad, we must support one another, and that’s love. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2024 7:29:00 AM

IE, I have been better, but I was a whole lot younger. LOL..Thanks for the kind review. We don't know what love is until we go through a few years of terrible problems. I know this because I thought I loved my husband then after going through so many difficult adult problems I found that I had no idea what love was about. Have a great day. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/4/2024 12:45:00 AM

a luminous sonnet, to the glory of lovers understanding each others, so much quality in words and sounds, enjoyed a lot Sara yann

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2024 6:05:00 AM

Yann, thank you for the nice review of my work and the time spent here. I appreciate it. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 3/3/2024 9:03:00 AM

I love how your sonnet celebrates the power of love to transcend barriers and illuminate the path forward. Through its lyrical beauty and heartfelt sentiment, the poem invites readers to reflect on the profound meaning of love and its capacity to imbue life with joy, purpose, and hope. Best of luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 12:10:00 PM

Thank you, SO, for the high praise. I did not enter this one in a contest. I just found that I wanted to write a poem using the suggested words. Sara K

James Peranteau

Date: 3/3/2024 5:26:00 AM

inspiring write this chilly Sunday morning Sara....post this a few more times...many can use the inspire....much love ;)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, James, I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2024 11:05:00 PM

This is very lovely and I know you are an excellent mate. You have been through a lot and are together and strong after many years.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 6:10:00 AM

Yes, life is not easy sometimes, Andrea. I know you know what life can issue out to us. You have been through a lot in the last few years. Thanks for stopping by and taking time to leave a nice review of my work. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/2/2024 4:06:00 PM

I appreciate your well constructed and contemplative poem about relationships. I agree with you. Marriage helps one another grow and heal and become closer to God. My hubby and I are soulmates, God's gift to one another. I ramble. Loved your poem. Faving, hugs, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 6:09:00 AM

I am delighted that you would fav my work, Sara B. I appreciate the thoughtfulness in your comments. It is good to share a little about ourselves. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/2/2024 3:53:00 PM

This exquisite piece of verse evokes profound thought, beautifully woven with vivid imagery that demonstrates your meticulous contemplation.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2024 6:07:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/2/2024 12:18:00 PM

Dear Sara, your poem beautifully captures the essence of love amidst the surreal aspects of life. The imagery you evoke is remarkable, creating a narrative of serendipity and healing. Your words wonderfully speak to love's transformative power and the beauty of shared moments. Ahhh the wonders of love's journey. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/2/2024 2:50:00 PM

Daniel, Thanks for the visit to my page. Your comments add a special touch. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K