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Surprising Hugg

I got out off the cab to say goodby uncertain of the surprise waiting me byy she jumped on me and tightly she hugged like spider she was and i felt like a bug her fragrance was mild and yet it was firm tht maroon coat warm and body beneath stubborn weather was cold but my breath so hot her arms across my back were holding me on that grip was so tite it was hard for me to breath that moment was so emotional my heart forgot to beat she was so close to me as she could ever be for those 10 seconds my whole world was at freez that time was precious i couldnot let her go we were onto each other like body and sole her hairs brushed against my lips tickling my nose making me laugh and all the sadness was gone i love you she said breathing the same air her lips touching my cheek she said take care i love you too and a kiss my lips guided to her ear i wished to look in her eyes and see if there were tears i stood there watching her as she walked away leaving me behind i felt my sole was about to decay she didn,t looked back it made me so sad but till now it was the best hugg i ever had

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Date: 12/27/2023 2:28:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/4/2016 11:41:00 AM
Mahnoor Riaz Khan, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:19:00 PM
MAHNOOR, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:03:00 AM
Maphnoor, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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