Surprise

If you went to heaven and your worst enemy was there would you be surprised or filled with fear? Maybe you would walk out and never return and end up in the other place.. where you would burn you just never know who might be up there You'd be so filled with love you wouldn't even care

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 7:39:00 PM

rereading this one. It's one of my favorites of yours.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 7/9/2012 5:41:00 AM

Joseph , If we get there hate would be washed away,Love the way you summed it up. Well done !!! Anne

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/3/2012 8:14:00 PM

Hopefully there's no room for hate when we reach the other side. I think you wound this up with a great dose of wisdom!

Joseph May
Date: 7/3/2012 8:41:00 PM

thank you Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2012 6:18:00 AM

I heard one theory that when we see the "playback" of ourselves, we will be so mortified seeing our own faults on display, we won't have time to worry or think about others' misdeeds!! Good one, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 7/3/2012 8:41:00 PM

thank you Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2012 7:52:00 PM

interesting thought Joseph..so lets love everyone and all get to Heavern luv.. that way for sure.. awesome piece of creative poetry ..

Joseph May
Date: 7/3/2012 8:40:00 PM

thank you Linda for those kind words

Joseph May

Date: 7/2/2012 7:38:00 PM

Nigel... that sounds like pork pies so go to a nuclear sub and have a pigs ear and cool down in ding dong bell you can Christmas eve it

Nigel Fox

Date: 7/2/2012 2:28:00 PM

You know I care so much I might just jump into hells flames to escape your fire !