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On old woman's chimes May be rusty, but they still Ring once in a while.

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E.J. Smith

Date: 7/19/2012 4:31:00 AM

Thank you Carol. I appreciate your comment, as always.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals E. J. Love, Carol

Michael Smith

Date: 7/16/2012 2:59:00 PM

I'm her steel wool. Thanksfir making me laugh.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/25/2011 9:09:00 AM

Old men's too! Congrats on the selection. Enjoyed. Old daver

E.J. Smith

Date: 11/24/2011 6:19:00 AM

Thank you Carol.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/23/2011 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week E.J. Love, Carol

E.J. Smith

Date: 11/22/2011 12:14:00 PM

Thanks Michael. EJ

Michael Smith

Date: 11/22/2011 7:57:00 AM

Made laugh thank you for this treat.

E.J. Smith

Date: 11/22/2011 6:01:00 AM

Judith Meyer: sorry about the comma in the wrong place! Thanks again!

E.J. Smith

Date: 11/22/2011 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Mehta!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/21/2011 5:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, EJ

E.J. Smith

Date: 11/21/2011 3:04:00 PM

Thanks so much, Judith

Judith Angell Meyer

Date: 11/21/2011 12:54:00 PM

::Grin:: I like it. Congratulations on your featured work.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/25/2011 1:36:00 PM

When there's snow on the roof, there is usually a fire in the furnace. Vince

John Smith

Date: 9/4/2011 6:50:00 AM

Great play on words. I hope someone chimes in...

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/2/2011 8:15:00 PM

Such a clever tongue in cheek! I like it. Sincerely, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2011 2:01:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today E.J. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol