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An evening breeze lonely thoughts flowed, From my deepest core branching westwards Water skipping across moonlit ocean aglow An evening breeze. Lonely thoughts! - flowed Ripples of silver hues oscillating slow Stimulating a coupling of mystical words An evening breeze lonely thoughts flowed From my deepest core branching westwards! This poem uses the Triolet style --a stanza poem of 8 lines, following the rhythm of ABaAabAB. The first, fourth and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines (Source: Wikipedia).

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Date: 4/26/2016 12:47:00 AM
so beautiful...I love it
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