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Supreme Substance

There's a wind that hauls yon It's like a thin rope I step on A fragile path I,alone can see Despite my limbs, yet to be free Comes a tidal assault As wild as the lightning bolt The water's extreme unfriendliness Sends me to my weakest tenderness But with my core embedded and guarded Raging with fire cannot be defeated I live like the earth's body And this love for you is that fire within me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/13/2016 2:18:00 AM
Very brilliant write.i enjoyed.~7~....hugs
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Nicola An
Date: 4/15/2016 2:29:00 AM
Thank you:)
Date: 4/12/2016 8:10:00 PM
Amazing poem, Nicola...Linda
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