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Supreme Loneliness

Crowded city dying souls
Central of earth
Millions souls crafting their destiny
Heart of cities of iron plastic
Multitude traffic Lights

Dead crowd smile
Waving statues of emptiness
Stranger within misery of night
Priceless heartless so hollow
Snatch within our game
Silence through the middle of universe
Reflection your supreme Loneliness …

Playing game within yourself
Void in universe
Creators of game
Was it your reason to play game…………..
Behold children of loneliness

Curtain whisper
Creation starts to be alive …
Listen to the water, bed, pictures
They sing in the middle of the night
A soft whisper I’m alive this is your last trip!

Sit on train Ride this life journey with me
Living in this life alive ……
Your lips whisper in this Nudity
Reveal your hidden secrets begging
Sleep on my bed soft whispers
Tears and smile welcome to our universe lounge

Jul 8 09

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  1. Date: 12/23/2009 3:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on being a first round survivor Isa and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:24:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 1:43:00 PM
    Wonderful writing! Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Isa! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 11:04:00 AM
    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 10:28:00 AM
    Dear Isa, Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry this week. Lainie

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 10:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 5:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Isa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 10:43:00 AM
    Thanks you carol and all of you guys for the warm welcome .... hope you enjoy the scrap :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 9:15:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Isa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 7:40:00 AM
    This is nice...enjoyed reading it. Marty

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 6:52:00 AM
    Sensing "silence through the middle of the universe" is truly a reflection of loneliness, Isa. But when you find someone to ride with you on the journey through life, the world seems to come alive again. Beautifully written, Isa! Love, Carolyn