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Supple Cherry Door

SUPPLE CHERRY DOOR supple cherry door with pearly white inside screen used widely to eat and talk slow to quick feed and purge edging toward modest kindness or leading highway masking mirage purity to listeners whose wisdom is like rusting iron leaving them used and abused? (c) Olive Eloisa 4:52am July 19, 2014 Sponsor nette onclaud Contest Name DOOR TO A WAYRA 6th place, to God be the glory..:)

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James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2014 2:03:00 PM

Indeed what we allow to pass, must be seen to be clean as the consequences don't just stop there. Clever little poem Olive, James :)x

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/6/2014 7:28:00 PM

forgot to rate a heavenly SEVEN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/6/2014 7:27:00 PM

what a winner, your writing conjures up good feelings in my spirits! I thank you True Poetess!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:44:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2014 2:41:00 PM

eloi, powerful write and really introspective !...your splendid win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/25/2014 6:03:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats on ur winning lovely write dear Olive!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/24/2014 8:03:00 PM

Back again to bravo your win, well done sweetie :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2014 7:32:00 PM

Good to see your version of wayra at last. And good to see you on the list. Congrats, sweetie.

David Mohn

Date: 7/24/2014 6:57:00 PM

Very unique and beautifully constructed...congrats Olive

Paul Callus

Date: 7/24/2014 4:54:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi...congratulations once again!! I read this before but did not comment. Your message is clear and wise. Also enjoyed the uniqueness in choice of topic. well done:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/31/2014 2:23:00 AM

Thank you much Paul..:) I appreciate your every inspiration..:D

Ct Duet

Date: 7/24/2014 3:29:00 PM

Hey...how awesome...congrats

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/26/2014 7:12:00 AM

Thanks much.. :D CAssie or Tim.. :D?!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/24/2014 9:59:00 AM

As always great style, finely well written words with a clear message! Huge congrats on your fine win my friend!!!!!!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/26/2014 7:12:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.. :) hope all is well to you.. Regards to your wife.. :) GBU

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/24/2014 9:49:00 AM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find its quality very good..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/26/2014 7:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara.. :) I appreciate this.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/24/2014 6:15:00 AM

Perfect form aND LOVELY APPROACH TO THE THEME, OLIVE

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/25/2014 12:54:00 AM

Thank you so much...:)

Keith Robson

Date: 7/20/2014 9:21:00 AM

Really to the point poetry Olive, I like your style very much...Keith.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/21/2014 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so much..:)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/19/2014 7:19:00 AM

superb as ever Olive...yet another unique poem on the theme. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/21/2014 1:30:00 PM

Thank you sweet Jan..:)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/19/2014 7:07:00 AM

How wonderful Olive...have a glorious day and GBU .....hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/21/2014 1:30:00 PM

Thank Tim..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/19/2014 3:18:00 AM

Olive this is sweet n lovely dear ! gl in contest!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/21/2014 1:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma:)

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/18/2014 9:41:00 PM

Oh what a unique take on this girl! you sure did think outside the box, and opened a door that I'm sure none other has opened yet. Great thinkin' Hugs :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 8:49:00 AM

Thanks for the drop by.. :D! love lots mwah! :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 8:48:00 AM

:O :D thanks Cassie.. :) My muse tells me to write unto this one and so I did... it's a challenge by the way and it seals a message

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 8:48:00 AM

that we should always be careful to our words and everything that we place in our mouth as they are doors too: 1: door to our growth and nourishment, 2) growth also to others who hear us and 3) doors too that impedes our progress and others us well.. :) I speak not literally here of just eating or talking but more.. :) :D

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/18/2014 9:40:00 PM

This is very good Olive. The last stanza is really good. Good luck in contest... Lucilla

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/19/2014 8:44:00 AM

Thank you sweet Lucy.. :) blessings be upon to you today.. :)