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Supermoon Eclipse

Pink sky in the morning Blue sky in the afternoon kiss Another golden sunrise Beautiful supermoon eclipse © Copyright KC.Leake 29th September 2015 All Rights Reserved For The Contest Eve Roper 10-27-2015

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Date: 10/11/2015 11:58:00 AM
If I may suggest an alternative rhyme scheme: Pink sky in the morning / Blue sky in the afternoon / Another golden sunrise / Beautiful eclipsed moon. Congratulations on your win. / M
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/12/2015 1:23:00 AM
Thats an alternative maurice, I'll bear that in mind, but I did want the kiss in there!!! Thanks for the congrats and kind words Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/10/2015 1:29:00 PM
beautiful poem!!
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/11/2015 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, Glad you liked it!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/9/2015 12:36:00 AM
Kevin, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/9/2015 2:42:00 AM
Thank you Skat, I appreciate the feed back God Bless Kevin
Date: 10/8/2015 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/9/2015 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Sara, I appreciate your lovely comment Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/7/2015 3:43:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Kevin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/8/2015 2:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win too Jan, Thanks for the feedback!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/7/2015 3:32:00 PM
Kevin, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/8/2015 2:36:00 AM
Thank you Eve, And congratulations to all the winners ( I'm supermooned ) Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/3/2015 7:44:00 AM
This may be my favorite for the contest - very creative and expressive, plus you made me reflect and smile ... CayCay
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/3/2015 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Caycay, I'm really glad you enjoyed this and thanks for read and lovely comment. Kevin
Date: 9/29/2015 7:30:00 PM
Love it ! Pure and simple :) ~~X~~
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/30/2015 1:04:00 AM
Thanks Kim, Glad you liked it!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 9/29/2015 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Kevin good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/29/2015 11:43:00 AM
Thank so much Jan' For the vote of confidence, much appreciated Best Wishes Kevin

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