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Superficial Love

My physical lusts each and every cut, rip, and peck on his body my intellectual craves his thoughts, opinions, and charisma, my emotional wants to laugh, cry, and embrace his deepest feelings. Yet my emotional abundance does not captivate him, my intellectual determination does not appeal to him it is my physique alone that attracts his mind, body, and soul. It is the complexion of my skin that caught his attention, it is the reflection of my smile that made him acknowledge my presence, it is the kink in my hair that preserved his interest, the seduction in my eyes that tempted his spirit, the curves on my body that infatuated his sexual desires, and my forbidden fruit that took his whole being into euphoria yet my mind and soul is yet to be explored! My physical body has been pleasured time and time again but my emotional and intellectual elements remain untouched like the footprints on the moon!

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  1. Date: 6/5/2013 4:23:00 PM
    lol, now I'm creeping back here... I am making sure I don't miss your incoming poems... I noticed you have a new poem called "Renegade Heart".. I'm on my way to read the poem... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 9:08:00 PM
    Hi Nicolette, i can tell by reading your poem you are clever. I love the physical impact and reflection. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

    Holness Avatar Nicolette Holness
    Date: 6/5/2013 1:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your warm welcome much appreciated... I am definitely looking for feedback as much as possible as I am a beginner still working on format and learning the different forms of poetry as well. I will be creeping your page shortly lol
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:41:00 AM
    Nicolette, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Holness Avatar Nicolette Holness
    Date: 5/29/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much I'm a beginner trying to get my feet wet :)