Super Moon

A magical orange night-time orb The Super Moon was an awesome sight A tangerine dream for all to share It’s just a shame I slept through the night! Written 3rd October 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2015 1:25:00 PM

you were like me, missing out. Dang!! well, congrats for your win in the contest.

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:35:00 AM

Hi Nathan, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2015 3:14:00 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Nathan Bach
Date: 10/8/2015 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I've never written a quatrain before. In fact I'd never even heard of one! Nath:-)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 3:42:00 PM

Oh Nathan such a shame you missed it - i ADORE your 3rd line it is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Nathan Bach
Date: 10/8/2015 3:21:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I pinched the line from my Dad's favourite group, Tangerine Dream. Nath:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2015 3:23:00 PM

Nathan, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 10/8/2015 3:28:00 PM

Great job for your very fist

Nathan Bach
Date: 10/8/2015 3:18:00 PM

Thank you so much. I've never written a quatrain before. Nath:-)