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Holding on to my words Your kiss Took the sun And replaced it with Mars There is a deep chill As the heartbeats echo from Underneath the ground It could have been confused with an earthquake But it is the sound of the dead returning to life Mesmerized, her lips are like to two mountains hidden with Gold in between I never thought this would happen to me I never thought someone could amaze me I hope not to ruin things this time Tugging strings A symphony plays every time a smile exudes from her face Dear Lord, I hope she is the one That will be the one for awhile Ladylove, what is your name? Truly irresistible, Marilyn Monroe does not have anything on this girl If for instance, I was interested You would be more interested in the football star The trail of perfume you left behind Reminds me of my cowardice not to ask Taking the chance not to get hit by the Suave man in a suit and tie Rewind, Now I took the chance and you are mine No more looking in a million different places True or not true “This is the best rodeo ride” Yes, I finally made it to a fifth round Releasing the floodgate of emotions Are we there? We are from away from home Don’t look down The stars are reflecting from your eyes I would give all my money away And be poor and in love Just for one day This kind of love creates shooting stars in the sky Voice like an angel If “Michael” means arch angel Her name must be Michelle The secret quest is now revelation With Crimson Satin upon her breast Clings to her body’s frame as if a test Draping soft curves along her trim waist Longs to depart without lingering haste She has everything I want to know I can take days just tasting

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Date: 7/24/2010 4:51:00 PM
Your analogies are strong and direct Tavarus.. lots of depth and comparisons too.. a blending of emotions .. passions ...conversations .. intense and immense .. enjoyed my friend.. with luv...
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:43:00 PM
thanks Matt, glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/21/2010 5:36:00 PM
I enjoyed this write. I like how you tied it all together. Great write.
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