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Super Cell

ominous approach lackluster cumulus clouds perplexed perfection.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/23/2015 12:02:00 PM
awesome... sk
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:26:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the flow of alliteration in and the message. It's interesting taking this haiku apart. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:01:00 AM
always in need of a permanent never to be
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:44:00 PM
Wonderful images with alliteration conveying your message thro'
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Date: 6/10/2010 1:49:00 PM
Excellent haiku and timely too as we look off the coast while hurricane season gets underway. Great work, Rick! Love, Carolyn
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