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Sunshine Trip Inside My Mind

I dreamed of the hills, Fountain, springs But she didn't see. Waking up, I get the buzz Wondering whats all the fuss Things that couldn't be.. She tells me "hello, I had a talk with the fellow, The trip is a day away! I sprang up from my bed Like waking up from the dead "Yes!" was all i could say, I packed my bags Including the rags Never felt such bliss! The songs I had sung So many days, since they rung My mind, like daffodil-thrills.. But my life, A boundless strife, The tickets couldn't be arranged, My lips lost its hue, Nothing else she could do, My life had been deranged. Tonight I will cry And imagine to fly The far away worlds that lure. Silly, I am! for giving a damn, My dreams will keep me alive, for sure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 11:26:00 PM
Interesting write, Iman. I will have to look at this a number of times because there are so many meanings in the words you have crafted. Keep the pen flowing. Dan C p.s. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:27:00 AM
Very introspective thoughts you have penned in this write, Iman
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