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Sunshine Promises

Sunshine warming spirit breaking through rain clouds promise for bare shoulders nude legs bare feet ~*~ Note: Inspired by some sunshine today!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2011 1:46:00 PM

Another stunner!!! How I love the sun!!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/9/2011 2:37:00 AM

this is very beautiful and romantic

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/7/2011 10:09:00 AM

great inspiration derived from the sun. i salute this art. love, lightning ink.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 10:06:00 AM

Wish you could visit me, Annalise. You'll see a lot of this in the "Sunshine State." Love the way you describe sun breaking through rain clouds and the "promise" it brings for bare shoulders, legs and feet. Even when it's cold here, neighbors dress in shorts. Most Floridians don't have a lot of sweaters and long pants. Really enjoyed your cinquain, dear! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2011 7:33:00 PM

a heart warming write, a good inspiration that was Annalise, enjoyed your cinquain,..p.d.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/6/2011 5:05:00 PM

no doubt about it- the sunshine does bring on inspiration...and here in Florida...persperation!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 4:20:00 PM

love this one (is it Audrey here? I keep forgetting) I just love going barefoot!! A highest rating. Luv, Andrea