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~ Sunshine In Your Eyes~ (Free Verse) Come with me my Love Take this walk with me Hold very tight my hand Give me love tonight. Hear my heart here beating Racing for you so fast You've made my life complete In my eyes see the glow. You're in the moon and stars at night In your eyes there is sunshine Visions of you fill my head Day and night I dream of you. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 February.14.2015

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David Brown

Date: 2/17/2015 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful work, Dorian. Captured the essence of the occasion and subject so very well. Loved it. David

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/17/2015 11:48:00 PM

Thank you so kindly David, for stopping by and commenting so nice. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/15/2015 7:25:00 PM

Dear Dorian, Wonderful flow I agree with Emile on this one, love your pic great match up on this poem. It shows the passion of your devotion to your Valentines life mate, and also your love for him. I'm so glad you found someone so special, for such a special person you deserve this and more. I told you I would do a better commenting job tonight but you have impressed me with this work, I'm glad I made that promise to you and stopped by tonight, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/16/2015 5:24:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Cheri, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! You're so sweet! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/14/2015 1:15:00 PM

Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem of love. Emile.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 12:03:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Emile, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

James Peranteau

Date: 2/14/2015 12:33:00 PM

How very lovely this write dear poet ! Your heart is so loving, and thankful I am to be one of the souls who get to read it ! Have a blessed weekend..............much love, james

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 12:43:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, James, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! You're always so sweet to me, thanks!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D " "

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/14/2015 9:21:00 AM

dorian, a sweet, lovely gem that sparkles like your other works.. much delighted.. huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 12:01:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Nette, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! You're so sweet!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D " "

Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/14/2015 9:22:00 AM

happy hearts day!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/14/2015 7:50:00 AM

Lovely write my sweet D. Wish you a very happy Valentine's Day. God bless you my favorite poetess.So sweet of you...rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 11:59:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Rajat, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dearest friend! You're so sweet with me always, thanks again!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/14/2015 4:12:00 AM

Just lovely romantic write, Dorian. I love reading what flows from your creative pen. A 7. More smies from the land of thousnd isles...:D Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 11:57:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, Kim, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! You're so sweet!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Tim Smith

Date: 2/14/2015 2:15:00 AM

A beautiful love note...hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,Tim, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 2/13/2015 11:26:00 PM

Nice. Did you take the moon and stars line from the Game of Thrones series?

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 11:52:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, Mark, for stopping by and comments. Now, that you mentioned it no, I didn't :)Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D