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Sunshine Birth

Lonely bed, Erupts Winter ceased, No longer sleeps An unearthed seed

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Date: 2/19/2009 12:29:00 PM

I like the use of persoinification in this poem. The title enhances the poem. I see that you tend to end your poems with a comma--do you have a reason for that? I guess I'm just curious as I've never seen it before reading your poetry. Keep on writing! Karen

Arany P.

Date: 2/12/2009 3:53:00 AM

i love the imagery... you gring with this haiku... lovely it would be to actually cease the winter!! can't wait for spring ~ Arany

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/8/2009 12:42:00 PM

very wonderfully written with deep insight and emotional bliss,,blessings..Cecil

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/7/2009 1:43:00 PM

Lovely little gem. Thanks for reading my posting. Good luck. Joyce

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/6/2009 6:19:00 AM

Tyesha you are on a roll with these haiku's - excellent work on these - Each has carried a most profound message - God Bless, MJ

Sue Mason

Date: 2/5/2009 4:25:00 PM

Beautifully done, Tyesha ... you might want to change the last comma to a period ... or not ... smile ...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/4/2009 10:03:00 AM

what a sight! Very nice Tyesha. Light & Love Debbie

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/3/2009 10:39:00 PM

Sensitive and fresh haiku. Good use of haiku format. Thanks for your comment. Love, iolanda

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 2/3/2009 3:01:00 PM

Perhap's an entry in the spring contest, currently going on??? Looks like a winner to me! Well written, Tyesha!! And thank-you for you continued appreciation of my efforts at writing poetry, as I continue to learn from gifted poets, as yourself- Have a blessed day! poet butterfly

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/3/2009 8:57:00 AM

This is wonderful Tyesha. Like Brian said, creation. here. Beautiful! Love, Robin