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Sunshine Beams

It's amazing to see you smile sweet beauty lights blushes warm the soul Looking behind the mirrors a reflection stares straight back at you love Sparkling in the mist when rainbow colors sprinkle magic precious gem

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/14/2014 10:32:00 AM

The warmth of the sunbeams reflect so beautifully through the mirror of your verse Liam.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/14/2014 10:44:00 AM

thank you kindly charmaine truly very beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/13/2014 4:42:00 PM

Liam, A most wonderful write here Mate!! You've employed the Senryu form well to achieve a vivid and compelling reflection of you of the theme and associated imagery. Extraordinary Job!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/13/2014 7:26:00 PM

thank you so much gary drawing how warm a smile draws to the mirrors sunshine to the soul warm if that makes sense smiling wonderful comment dear friend sending you an irish blessing

Darlene Gifford

Date: 10/13/2014 11:24:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem with all its wonderful imagery. Very inspiring!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/13/2014 7:20:00 PM

thank you darlene for the dazzling comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated

Paul Callus

Date: 10/13/2014 9:00:00 AM

I love these senryu, Liam....all three radiate positivity. Well done! // paul

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/13/2014 9:37:00 AM

thank you paul wonderful comment heartfelt deeply appreciated dear friend