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Sunshine

In the morning light, I rise with a smile, Life's turned around, it's been quite a while. I used to carry a heavy heart's load, But now, in my step, there's a skip and a glow. The days once cloudy, filled with despair, Have given way to skies so fair. I'm just a young girl, no worries, you see, Happier than ever, wild and free. It's as if the world decided to cheer, And whispered sweet secrets in my eager ear. The shadows have lifted, the sun shines so bright, Everything's changed, everything's right. My heart, once heavy, now dances with glee, Life's painted in colors, as far as I see. With each passing day, my dreams take flight, I'm full of hope, my future's so bright. No longer held down by what used to be, I've found my joy, I've found my key. To open the door to a world so fine, Where happiness flows like sweetest wine. So, here's to a life that's changed for the best, To laughter, and dreams, and love's sweet caress. I'm a young girl, with joy in my heart, A brand new beginning, a fresh start.

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Date: 12/4/2023 2:50:00 PM
I truly enjoyed reading your happiness poetry today. It made my day go so much better. You turned my cloudy day into a day of sunshine. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry with us. Carol
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 12/5/2023 9:40:00 AM
Hello there Carol! I'm so happy my poem could lift a little bit your spirits! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day!
Date: 10/23/2023 5:07:00 AM
Ariana, your poem "sunshine" is a beautiful and uplifting celebration of new beginnings. The imagery is vibrant and optimistic, and the tone is full of hope and joy. I especially appreciate the way you use the metaphor of sunshine to represent the speaker's newfound happiness.
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/23/2023 5:53:00 AM
Hi Daniel! I really appreciate your comment, you're really kind! My main intention with this poem is to express hope and happiness! Thanks for your comment, have a great day!!
Date: 10/22/2023 1:36:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Ariana, penned with great imagery as well as lovely rhyme and flow and I love your positivity, make sure never to lose that. Have a great day, Gordon
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/22/2023 10:16:00 PM
Hi Gordon! Thank you a lot for your kind words! I'll keep myself happy, and writing more poetry! Thanks for your comment. Take care!
Date: 10/21/2023 12:44:00 PM
It is great to see the progress of your words towards happiness, continue with your writing, you are very talented beyond your youth!!
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/22/2023 12:27:00 AM
Hi Mark! Thanks for your comment, you are really kind! I'm still learning so I can make better poems! Thank you really!
Date: 10/21/2023 9:28:00 AM
A beautiful, poem full of positivity. Well written.
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Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/21/2023 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette, that was my main intention: positivity! Thanks for your comment, I'm trying my best.

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