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Sunsets Beckon

Off to catch her beauty where smiles illuminate my dream sunsets beckon bleed no more you pretty pen line your heart with gold stories skillfully written but never heard lay her down and into beauty blow lay her down to places never known

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2016 9:47:00 AM

I loved reading this one with its great imagery, Tim.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/12/2016 4:47:00 PM

great write, I think I may have read a few meanings in this!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/12/2016 6:54:00 AM

Yes I can visualize the sunset being laid down into places unknown. A fave here..This is so beautiful.

John Lawless

Date: 11/11/2016 9:08:00 PM

Well if this doesn't get the sunsets a raise nothing will. Great job Tim...I've read it three times and each time my grin grows softer and wider.

White Wolf

Date: 11/11/2016 8:47:00 PM

A great golden pen you have to my friend. Beautiful imagery.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/11/2016 7:10:00 PM

Hi Tim, You have penned such a beautiful sunset, and liked what I saw. Well done:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/11/2016 6:39:00 PM

I love colorful sunsets! We get some some pretty nice ones here but west Texas is where the colors are. Really nice Tim:)

Chris Green

Date: 11/11/2016 5:49:00 PM

Soft, beautiful and sensual Tim. This is one gorgeous sunset.