Sunsets and Sunrises

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~Sunsets And Sunrises~ ( Free Verse) The day goes along Extending its very long wings Extracting life from every light From every sunset till is united Forever with all the night Parting in silence with all the winds Half-closed eyes without any Sleep Hearing every single loving note And whisper Watching every single passing and Fading shadow Searching all the time For a brand-new and glowing light Till the night again departs So sad And from it comes out another New Sunrise! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,16,2015

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Arlene Smith

Date: 1/20/2015 3:43:00 AM

This one made me smile... Beautiful imagery.. Hugs, my friend. Arlene

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 1/17/2015 3:04:00 AM

Hi Dorian...what a beautiful day this must have been...thank you for the warm colours in your pen...rgds, 7habang

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/17/2015 3:28:00 AM

Thank you so very much my very dear friend Thabang, for stopping by and for your very kind comments. Much appreciated it! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxoxxox D.^O^

Leon Enriquez

Date: 1/16/2015 8:27:00 PM

Dear Dorian: Very nice reflective poem. I can see the sunsets as the words stream along. All my best wishes my friend, Leon.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/17/2015 3:29:00 AM

Hi Leon!Thank you so very much my very dear friend for stopping by and for your very kind comments. Much appreciated it! Have a very lovely day!:) Love and hugs! xxxoxxox D.^O^