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Sunset Tableau

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Soft tangerine sky; Prelude to twilight~ Sunset’s passing grace Of her gentle gaze, Like the final glance Of a brief romance. 20 March 2021 Notes: Photo taken by yours truly during a winter sunset at Samnak Park, Busan, South Korea For "Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Joseph May 1st Place Entered for " All Yours (April 2) Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Brian Strand 1st Place

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/17/2021 7:44:00 PM

Oh, the poetic beauty that flows from your gifted pen takes my breath away, JCB. The splendor of sunset fades too fast, but not the impact of your bittersweet verse. Congratulations for your wonderful win, dear poetess. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 4/15/2021 11:16:00 AM

Sweet and perfect! Congratulations!

Louvenia Duncan

Date: 4/13/2021 7:27:00 PM

Nice poem!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/9/2021 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations....a well deserved win! Your imagery, delightful. Blessings, Paulette

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/2/2021 11:25:00 AM

A lovely tableau, JCB! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/1/2021 11:01:00 PM

Congrats to win on your Brief Romnce. Blessings

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/26/2021 10:18:00 PM

I love your comparison of a passing sunset to a brief romance. Congratulations!

David Mohn

Date: 3/26/2021 5:39:00 PM

Yours is my favorite that I have read...congratulations on this beauty JCB

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2021 2:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend..........................

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 1:18:00 PM

Hi JBC, This is just lovely. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/26/2021 11:17:00 AM

Wonderful JCB! Beautiful musical flow, delightful wording and amazing imagery - "sunsets passing grace," "like a final glance." This is a fav for me. All the best. Blessings and joy!