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Sunset Squeeze

squeeze of fresh orange sundive into the ocean horizon to shore olympic hotshot’s fleet swim tenderfoot sails through the shine 7/28/2021 Bite Size Poem no15 Sponsor ~ Line Gauthier

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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/30/2021 4:22:00 AM
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Ya got me... a spectacular scene to wake up to every day Miss Kimmie! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2021 10:42:00 AM
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Thank you, dear, sweet Jack!
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 7/29/2021 6:15:00 AM
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Such a lovely Tanka, Olympic gold medal comes to my mind, wish you all the best
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2021 4:19:00 PM
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Thank you :):)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/28/2021 11:27:00 PM
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Your personification fascinates me. Lovely tanka.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2021 3:29:00 AM
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Thank you, Victor!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/28/2021 6:00:00 PM
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Oooh! I like this so much. Freshly squeezed ocean spray for me... For all of your Tankas, Kim, I can only thank ya!! (Just love your tankas, I do). Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2021 3:30:00 AM
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Love your line too ~ freshly squeezed ocean spray! Thank you, dear poet!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/28/2021 4:29:00 PM
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So cute and interesting. I think it's personification, right?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 5:38:00 PM
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Yes. Thank you <3
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/28/2021 2:23:00 PM
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Excellent Tanka Kim. Very creative and beautiful. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 3:49:00 PM
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Thank you, Heidi!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/28/2021 12:49:00 PM
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A spectacular sight of God's creation, I never get tired of seeing it. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 12:57:00 PM
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God draws us to it and to Him. God bless you, Tom!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 12:41:00 PM
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So refreshingly, zestfully lovely, Kim! Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 12:56:00 PM
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Means a lot coming from you, Evelyn! <3
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2021 12:32:00 PM
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- Last night the sky by the sea was exactly as you describe it ... beautiful, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2021 12:36:00 PM
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Bask in the loveliness <3

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