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Sunset Grace

Staring teary eyed and awed from within our atmospheric cocoons, we witnessed the appearance of the first of seven dancing moons. As Primora, the closest sun, sank into the marbled vapor of the north, and Extran, the highest and farthest followed it forth, gleaming, mineral crested, curling, wind swept cliffs, sent double shadows across the multi colored mists. From within the fizzling aurora of a streaking star debuted the brass colored moon, Alacazar, followed by Splitz and Hoboken and it’s circling asteroid, Token, reflecting their eerie light on the myriad acid pools, like funhouse mirrors breaking all the known rules. When the last of Extran’s static rays disappeared, the acid lakes and puddles suddenly mirrored four of the moons, gem colored cliffs and a meteor shower. We looked at each other and cried at this beauteous power where an atmosphere much too hostile to survive, with it’s sunset that reinforced we were alive, imparted in our hearts an eternal, loving attitude, Of faith in our Maker and profound gratitude. We turned and slowly power drifted away, But in our beings that sunset is here to stay. Inspired by Paula Swanson's "Not Just Any Sunset" contest written 8/20/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/9/2011 9:40:00 PM
Beautiful astral dream Robert. The magic in this verse captivates the senses and takes the reader on a magical trip. I so enjoyed this as well your precious visits to me! :)
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula's "Not Just Any Sunset" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:48:00 PM
I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/22/2011 2:43:00 PM
enjoyed reading your alien experience!!
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your terrific third place win with this excellent expressive poetry luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:05:00 AM
A beautiful win, many congratulations!
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Date: 8/20/2011 9:31:00 PM
wonderful poem, just beautiful, congrats on your win Robert
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Date: 8/20/2011 7:59:00 PM
Robert- A nice space ship ride to see the double shadows and multicolored mists...love the different moons...gem colored cliffs and meteor showers. What a spectacular sunset made just for your safety. Just amazing science fiction here! I must keep this for myself! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 8/20/2011 6:32:00 PM
WoW! Heavens to Flash Gordon. a really good science fiction write. Great imagery. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/20/2011 6:14:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winners' circle to me..It would take a great faith to go out there and get back..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2011 5:39:00 PM
Magicaly creative, great read.... well done on your win
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:54:00 PM
hey Robert congrats on your win Dave
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:47:00 PM
Robert: Congratulations on your win in the Not Just Any Sunset...contest sponsored by Paula Swanson. Very challenging! Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/20/2011 1:57:00 PM
It's a long, beautiful way from the limericks :)
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