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Pebbles tossed, ripples blue, purple, tangerine one blur of movement and stillness soundless Sadness in heart's implosion I pluck cotton clouds from a sky that weeps colored candy Evening drapes slowly close over a mourning sea brightness drowns sings a lullaby to a lonely wave *** August 1, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 11/12/2017 8:44:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem which makes a picture in my mind.

Akshmala Sharma

Date: 10/8/2017 2:55:00 AM

Imagination at its best.i loved reading it.wonderful:)

Darren White
Date: 10/8/2017 9:13:00 AM

Thank you so much, I am thrilled you like my poem :)

Bernard Chan

Date: 8/23/2017 6:05:00 AM

Wonderful imagery. I especially like plucking cotton clouds from a sky that weeps colored candy. Beautiful :)

Darren White
Date: 10/8/2017 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Bernard, I am happy you think it's beautiful :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/12/2017 1:56:00 AM

Very nice imagery, Darren, and a beautiful write. Enjoyed it very much.

Darren White
Date: 8/12/2017 2:06:00 AM

Thanks my friend. This was a picture prompt. I like doing those.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/10/2017 8:13:00 AM

Very cool poem indeed. Nice imagery and wording and form.

Darren White
Date: 8/12/2017 2:05:00 AM

Thank you, Ronald :)

Jean Murray

Date: 8/9/2017 6:10:00 PM

So lonely yet so lovely.

Darren White
Date: 8/10/2017 5:30:00 AM

Jean, thank you :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 8/7/2017 1:48:00 PM

Such imagery in this beautiful write.

Darren White
Date: 8/8/2017 2:45:00 AM

Elizabeth, thank you

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/7/2017 12:32:00 PM

Beautifulgentle as sunset glides. Excellent

Darren White
Date: 8/8/2017 2:45:00 AM

Beautiful words for me, thank you.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/7/2017 12:20:00 PM

A tender melancholic pen, your "I pluck cotton clouds from a sky that weeps" be stills my beating heart dear poet. Wonderful write. Hugs and buckets of love xomo

Darren White
Date: 8/8/2017 2:45:00 AM

Thanks ma mo!