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Sunset

The sun has many other lands to give the light of day So in its golden splendor it slowly begins to fade away And says goodnight with another magnificent display
Barbara Gorelick 8/3/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2013 9:09:00 AM
enjoying this one again...soup mail
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Date: 8/20/2013 9:16:00 PM
:) .congrats... love ~SKAT~ .
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Date: 8/19/2013 5:10:00 PM
Barbara, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! xox PD
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Date: 8/18/2013 8:50:00 AM
I love the simplicity of this piece, congratulations.
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Date: 8/18/2013 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win my dear friend Barbara. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/4/2013 7:25:00 PM
What a wonderful way to describe a sunset...on its way somewhere else......beautiful
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Date: 8/4/2013 1:50:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading this one today..I am walking into that sunset now...Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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