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Sunset

Sun goes down in abstract silences, deep into the breath of primary colours. The universe blends in perfumes of passion’s passed moments. Singing midnight in white rime by cicada, lost in flowers lime, dreams move in the senses of the universe— setting atomic desire free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/12/2013 7:01:00 AM
You've captured both "Butter-Scotch Afternoons " and "Sweet Caramel Evenings' in this short poem. Wonderful expression.
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Date: 2/28/2013 6:32:00 AM
'atomic desire' - I am inspired!
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/28/2013 9:31:00 AM
:) Thank you Michael!

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