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Sunset

An ever changing landscape Clouds billow across the sky Moments caught in memory Fire in heaven The sun will not be denied Its kaleidoscope of pinks Lighting its path to sunset Fire in my heart Barbara Gorelick 11/14/12 Natural Dodoitsu contest

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/17/2013 7:03:00 PM

Wonderful sunset you have penned here. It is just bursting with things for the imagination to feed off of.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2013 9:24:00 PM

barbara I love how you connected yours to the emotional element. Wonderful poem set. Congrats on the win.

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2013 12:16:00 PM

Barbara, , congratulations with your awesome win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 10:01:00 PM

BARBARA, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2013 5:30:00 PM

Very descriptive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2013 9:22:00 PM

Truly lovely. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2013 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win, Barb! Love, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Barbara love xx

Kash Poet

Date: 11/15/2012 6:07:00 AM

Beautiful imagery here Barbara!Lovely read.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2012 3:52:00 PM

Reads like a winner..I am sure that Russell will enjoy this one..Sara