Sunset

the dying woman gasped at the magnificence of her last sunset

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 8:23:00 PM

I'm glad to see this on the winners' list, Jack. Congratulations.

Gloria Williams

Date: 6/5/2011 6:56:00 PM

I like it

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2011 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 6/4/2011 8:01:00 AM

Excellent!Many congrats jack...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 8:34:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your super win with this creative entry for Rick.. well done my friend..luv.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/3/2011 12:55:00 PM

I wish MY hospital had a courtyard as beautiful as the one in the contest picture. lol. Gorgeous, empowering one to ' take in ' all there is to behold on this brief journey. Gwendolen

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/3/2011 12:28:00 PM

A fine piece of monoku..spellbinding!!Good luck to you if it is for the contest..gautami

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2011 10:12:00 PM

Very interesting and different way to do the contest, jack!! coolio.

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 6/2/2011 5:35:00 PM

MONOKU of yours is really wonderful....seeing the last sunset of her life,,,,tha last chance to see the beauty of life..... ***jun-jun

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2011 4:41:00 PM

A beauty Jack...I think we all hope to leave with the magnificence of this world befor our eyes...BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2011 3:12:00 PM

Enjoyed this one..Very impressive..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/2/2011 2:10:00 PM

What a wonderful way to express goodbye the world, jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 1:08:00 PM

Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Jack. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Ned Flanders

Date: 6/2/2011 12:32:00 PM

The play on words...well, quite frankly it states it all..nice one, enjoyed.