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Sunset

Mauve and crimson, Pink jagged lines Across darkening sky. Last moments of daylight Vanishing in beautiful Splashes of colour. Night descending quickly Changing colours into Deepening shades of indigo.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/10/2012 6:10:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your featured poem this week Francine. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 10/9/2012 2:54:00 PM

Sounds like you're on the water, Enjoyed your sunset. Congrats on the selection. daver

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/10/2010 5:10:00 PM

a constant source of inspiration! Thanks for all your nice comments. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2010 10:00:00 AM

Great descriptive write that let me see the scene..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

James Fraser

Date: 4/1/2010 4:45:00 PM

Daylights colours, sink into night, our wonderful views earlier, have drifted from sight. We awake to new dawns, as nature paints a new day, in our minds we applaud, her in every way >> wonderful poetry Francine >> James