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Sunset

As I walk along the beach feeling the cold wet sand between my toes. Watching the angels put the earth to sleep cascading pink, purple and gray sparkles on the ocean. Feeling the wind blowing around me hearing the angels whisper there sweet lullaby. "Jesus is Light He love's you all So my children Goodnight!" Published In Postive Teens National Magazine 2003

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Date: 12/6/2009 1:03:00 AM
I can see why the magazine chose to publish this uplifting work, Julie. It does inspire a positive outlook on life that is quite welcome amidst the groans of those who fall victim to despair. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will continue to share your great work with us! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:21:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup julie. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/3/2009 3:04:00 PM
Love It!
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Date: 12/3/2009 1:21:00 PM
Nice poem, love Simone
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:40:00 PM
Nicely done and so refreshing. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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