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Sunset

Sunset The sky is blue with a wash of orange A dash of pink a squirt of yellow appears slowly above the meadow A sting of red a touch of green and a streak of purple in between All these colors can be seen Dancing together in a strange way as the sun sets to end our day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/26/2009 10:02:00 AM
this is beautiful Maryam. i love it..
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Date: 1/21/2009 1:34:00 PM
Wonderful sunset, this poems reads beautifully. Great imagionation. Déirdre
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Date: 1/20/2009 3:34:00 PM
This is lovely, Maryam. I love the way you weaved all the colors together so perfectly and the rhyming is great! You've painted a lovely picture! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/19/2009 4:43:00 PM
colorful , "smart in between" I like it , Mohamed.
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Date: 1/19/2009 4:40:00 PM
Great write that is fill with brightness..reminds me of being a boy in Jamaica and seeing the sun going to sleep.
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Date: 1/19/2009 2:05:00 PM
Light and airy, uplifting, beautiful imagery, fun to read, good work. Judy riley
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Date: 1/19/2009 1:55:00 PM
this is beautiful, so cute I love the rhythm of it, such a smooth write, made me smile. Wonderful write, blessings ~Michaela~
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Date: 1/19/2009 1:55:00 PM
It sometimes happens just as you so beautifully described....and it's magnificent!! ~ Love, Carrie
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