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Sun's Sorrow

He saw everything Yet he could never do anything, All he could do Was sing sorrowful songs And watch Everyone that he cares for are in pain Yet all he could do, Was rise again And cause even more pain In sorrow, The sun fled, Leaving a blanket of vast darkness His sister, the moon Could not help For the two are far away Rain fell continuously, His sorrow never ceasing But he must return soon, Bearing pain and hurt He continues to watch over us. The wind and rays Sing his songs And the rain Express his sadness As he bears humanity’s anguish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/17/2015 2:23:00 PM
Excellent pen here Jeaniffer! Love all the imagery and metaphors displayed here, dear friend. A 7 from me! Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^
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