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Sun's Reflection

Sparkling water underneath the bright light sun swims the ocean. 02-28-15

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Date: 4/7/2015 9:44:00 AM

Nice

Charmane Bellen
Date: 6/9/2015 1:48:00 PM

thanks my friend! :-)

Date: 3/1/2015 9:11:00 PM

I always loved looking up through the water to see the sun . . . strong are his strokes!! 7

Charmane Bellen
Date: 3/2/2015 6:21:00 PM

yeah I agree with you David, the works of nature is stunning..thanks for visiting, have a nice day ~charmane~

Date: 3/1/2015 5:16:00 PM

beautiful imagery - great haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmane Bellen
Date: 3/2/2015 6:17:00 PM

thanks Jan! I took this picture of the ocean one early morning and while looking at it the idea just came up my mind.. :) it's just amazing.

Date: 3/1/2015 7:55:00 AM

- Beautifully written Haiku, Charmane !! - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmane Bellen
Date: 3/2/2015 6:09:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise, you're so sweet, take care ~ charmane