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Sunrise Under His Watch

eagle’s eyes press sky sun’s rays pierce through morning clouds... day of freedom reigns liberty’s sign waits new hope inspired by dawn’s light... nation’s pride rebounds *Entry for Poet Destroyer’s sunrise contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/16/2012 5:36:00 AM

And a beautiful sunrise poem here!!

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/22/2011 9:37:00 PM

perfect ,wonderful ,love duncan and ceizar xxx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/18/2011 9:06:00 AM

Carolyn congrats on your great win..David

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:17:00 AM

Like this Carolyn. Well done and congratulations

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2011 3:06:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/16/2011 5:25:00 PM

This is an excellent image to contemplate, Carolyn. How true that hope that rises with each dawn's light! Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2011 12:41:00 PM

Love these haiku, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 11/16/2011 11:52:00 AM

"By the dawn's early light." Very patriotic, Carolyn. Refreshing. We hear little enough of pride in our country these days. Those who criticize should go to most parts of Europe. (by themselves) I say they would be very eager to get back to the U.S.A. Love, daver

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/15/2011 6:10:00 AM

Let freedom ring through these beautiful haiku poems. Love you. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

David Williams

Date: 11/15/2011 1:46:00 AM

Carolyn i certainly hope so,, good luck..David

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/15/2011 12:53:00 AM

Do you think so Carolyn..? maybe.) it will take effort though..! and i wish the Nation all the best hope and inspiration..! and best to you for contest.!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2011 11:17:00 PM

oh, you added in that patriotic eagle, CArolyn. VEry nice. How are things going for you lately?

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/14/2011 4:58:00 PM

beautiful, my friend! jimbo

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/14/2011 4:47:00 PM

NIce double Haiku on the same patriotic theme. And off we go rebounding to better places ..I can see the eagle doing that as soon as he spots his hunting ground at the break of morning light.... I hope the nation can. Thanks for your wonderful comments Carolyn. You awesome, lady Carolyn... you be just awesome.

Cory Long

Date: 11/14/2011 4:11:00 PM

nicely done love the way you use the eagles eye. good luck in the contest. cory

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/14/2011 1:11:00 PM

Awesome, very awesome message within this write! Freedom, liberty, and pride, such great words that have illustrative meanings with attached feelings too! Prideful Poem!!