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Sunrise Bliss

Sunrise Bliss Sparkling golden drops of the rising sun Softly gleam the darkened azure sky Silk rosy beam of the dawning twilight Surfaces gently to attire the sea Satin white carpets of ocean infinite— Ness tenderly adorn the coast Scents ‘f morning breeze refreshes the air Sweepin’ away the chills ‘f yester night Scenery of splendor of the break of day Swirl to the senses, dazzle to the sight

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/10/2010 11:31:00 AM

excellent write again my friend thank you [duncan ]

David Smalling

Date: 10/1/2010 1:24:00 PM

Love the sense of this, feels like wine and laughter. A rich write. Welcome to Poetrysoup, I would be honored to have you as friend, drop in anytime my talented friend.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 5:27:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Celia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/26/2010 5:31:00 AM

Welcome to Soup.... This a wonderful poem to share as your first, looking forward to reading more...always Michael

Derek Ortiz

Date: 9/25/2010 9:44:00 PM

Welcome... A much enjoyed this poem of yours, hope to read more, read some of mines and let me know what you think... Please :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 5:36:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight... hope your stay on soup will be fun...check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/24/2010 8:30:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. luv your creativity .. soup offers many contests on site.. check them out to enter and good luck with luv..