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I watched the gloaming break in silent peace Dark purple change to pink before my eyes The bottoms of the clouds turned bright cerise Which bled into the lake before sunrise Then suddenly all wrapped in golden fleece The morning sun joined in his masterpiece January 23 2017 by Daniel Turner

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Vivien Wade

Date: 6/25/2017 7:42:00 PM

Lovely poem. I loved the line 'wrapped in golden fleece'. I'm at the age I rarely see a sunrise, bit living near the beach I see glorious sunsets, wrapped in golden fleece. Blessings, Vivien

Daniel Turner
Date: 6/26/2017 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Mrs Scarlett. I do love those sunrises and sunsets. There are so many different colors.

Kathleen Kroll

Date: 2/3/2017 11:17:00 PM

Beautiful. It's an inspiration in beauty

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:47:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Kathleen. I appreciate your kindness:)

James Inman

Date: 2/3/2017 7:32:00 AM

This is a beauty Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:46:00 AM

Thank you James:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2017 6:54:00 PM

Daniel, in my opinion, this was one of the top poem!! Congrats for your win.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. You are so sweet:) I wish you had been the judge:)

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/2/2017 2:36:00 PM

Congrats!!! Daniel...a beauty for sure...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thank you, Wingman:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/2/2017 11:50:00 AM

Back to congratulate you DT..

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:44:00 AM

Thank you, Charlie:)

John Hamilton

Date: 2/2/2017 8:36:00 AM

Amazing poem Danny, fantastic imagery, I love the word cerise, congrats on the win, I think this was the winner for me!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:44:00 AM

Thank you, John. You are very kind:)

Phillip Garcia

Date: 2/1/2017 8:59:00 PM

Get after it ST! This is great. Would fit great with 80 more syllables in a sonnet. Just sayin'

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:43:00 AM

Thank you, Phillip:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/1/2017 7:12:00 PM

What a beautiful painting you've created with your flowing words, Daniel. I love your poem and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Sandra:)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/1/2017 4:04:00 PM

Daniel, your imagery is stunning. Congratulations on your win!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Paulette:)

Joseph May

Date: 2/1/2017 2:37:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Daniel

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph:)

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/1/2017 1:55:00 PM

I knew this would do well congratulations

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Frederic. You are very thoughtful.

Deborah Burch

Date: 2/1/2017 12:33:00 PM

Hey Daniel...!!! I'm ba...ack!! ;) Congratulations!!!! Big Hugggs!! Deb

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:40:00 AM

:) You are so silly, Thank you again sweetie:)

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/29/2017 10:31:00 PM

WOW!! Well done Daniel!! Best wishes for the contest!! Hugggs. Deb

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:39:00 AM

Thank you, Deb:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/29/2017 1:13:00 AM

You have really made quite an impression with the 6 Line poem, Daniel! The colors of the sky as dawn is breaking are magnificent and you have captured them perfectly! ; ) 7+

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:38:00 AM

I know you have seen a few of these beauties where you live, Mrs Connie:) I hope you are feeling better.

Carole Duet

Date: 1/29/2017 1:09:00 AM

Beautiful, Daniel! You are a master with words...so talented and this poem is mesmerizing.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2017 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, Carole:) You flatter me!

Darren White

Date: 1/27/2017 1:08:00 PM

Oh, this is simply gorgeous.... You reply in comments that it is hard for you, but that's not how it reads, it flows so beautifully. Good luck in the contest!

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/27/2017 5:32:00 PM

Thank you, Darren. I appreciate your support and friendly visits:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2017 8:42:00 PM

Wonderful, Daniel. I am loving these kinds of poems with the six lines.

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/27/2017 10:06:00 AM

Not as easy as they look. Thanks for dropping by. You feeling OK these days?

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/26/2017 8:16:00 PM

Gorgeous poem and picture Daniel!:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 1/27/2017 10:05:00 AM

Thank you, Mrs Cheryl:)