Sunrise

Light rays Through my window I can see them clearly They shine upon my plants and I All day

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2016 11:50:00 AM

gosh, How did I miss this one. I really like it, Matt. I hate that my plant might die with little sun coming through my windows.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 11:00:00 PM

Today was a nice day, However, I'm always inside my house, for some reason, I don't like the sun. I have OCD's that cause me to stray or hide in the shadows. LOL, like a vampire. Have you ever seen that movie "Benchwarmers?" Theirs a character in the movie who has the Real Deal. He does not like the feel of the sun. He looks Albino. Anyways, I wish I lived in New York, that way I have a reason to stay indoor. No worries, I'm getting over the sun touching my skin phobia. LOL...Love LINDA

Matthew Anish
Date: 2/12/2016 12:06:00 AM

You live in the wrong area for someone with sun phobia. I know you have weeks of heat in the summer. Never saw "Benchwarmers" I hope you are well. I feel pretty good - just watched the politicians on TV. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 9:54:00 PM

Hi Matt, does this mean the snow is melting? Nice form my friend... LIDNA

Matthew Anish
Date: 2/11/2016 10:56:00 PM

The weather is icy cold now in NYC. I am going to try to stay inside for the next couple of days. I don't go back to my work at the college until the 22nd of this month. I hope we don't get any more snow. A few weeks ago we had 23 inches. It is gone now - how is the weather where you are? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/11/2016 11:25:00 AM

A beautiful CINQUAIN Matthew! Very descriptive with marvelous imagery. Well done! Keith

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2016 10:46:00 PM

charmed by the flow of your sunny lines, matthew.. grreat stuff!..huggs