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Sunrise

SUNRISE I rise from bed and open the window. Stars of Cassiopeia and small aurora are still visible; Venus hangs like a lantern in the eastern firmament - Goddess unmistakably beautiful and strong, Dominating the dark velvet void. Dawn is a yet unborn child following the black drama of night. In the uncertain hour before dawn, In the twilight zone of heaven’s half-light, Dawn seems fragile and may never succeed - still A young half-awake day is turning back the dim Dark cloths of night in a timorous start, While I light my flickering candle. Candle shadows on my wall : myth and reality changing constantly. The pressing sun rounds the curve of the horizon : The vault turns to dappled lighter shades of pastel. I finish shaving and wash away the soap and the sleep. Steady air not yet heated and land is black, Silhouetted under the fragile heliotrope veil, Ever-changing, embroidered With golden and silver light across the azure blue. As I put on coat and step out into the day The sun peers cautiously at me over the whitewashed wall. Out of the blue, dabs of sun tip the mountain peaks and spread down. The warmth starts to drive away small clouds Lit underneath with their glowing gold edges. The empty empyrean floods with gold, becomes alive and certain. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ( Date of posting 24 April 2011 ) For Chris D. Aechtner's Contest "Your Recent Precious Gem"

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Date: 5/26/2011 6:28:00 PM
Sydney! A pleasure to see your poem's honored in third place. Congratulations! Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:15:00 PM
Beautiful poem here Sydney,Congrats on your win....
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:17:00 AM
Many congrats Sydney on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:30:00 PM
I echo Debbie's sentiments. This is wonderful. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/26/2011 11:51:00 AM
Thank you very mush Joyce, I certainly have the greatest respect for your opinions and comments.....I always try to write from reality, as exact as possible...glad you like it....Syd
Date: 5/25/2011 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Sydney
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:44:00 PM
wowser! I'd have tied you and nette for number one. This goes to my fav's & a 7 and woser!!!GREAT! Congrad's TOO many great lines to even start a list! Light & Love
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/26/2011 11:56:00 AM
I have learned a lot by listening to you Debs, and this is certainly a comment i am proud to have .....fact is I like to write as exactly as possible, to keep i t as close as poss to what I feel is real..a bit like KEATS' "negative capability"....I guess I just struck it lucky in this poem...to be compared to Nette is an accolade I will remember....thanks very much for taking an interest in my doggerel Debs ...... best regards..Syd
Date: 5/25/2011 2:14:00 PM
Very creative work..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2011 12:48:00 PM
well, well... i'm glad you followed my instructions in poerty class 101, syd.. lol, just kidding! a real poetic delight that glows like sunrise's request... my fondest cheers for bagging a grand spot in the contest... applause! :) huggs, nette
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Sidney Beck
Date: 5/26/2011 12:01:00 PM
thanks for the lesson Netski...by the way dont forget to send me the $200 for allowing you to take No 1 spot.....well done as usual you genius-ette LOL
Date: 5/25/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2011 1:25:00 PM
Imaginative and lyrical write. Vividly and poetically described.
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Date: 4/24/2011 1:10:00 PM
wonderful entry, on 4th from last line is that an extra t in mountain, this is lovely Sydney and should do very well in the contest
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