Sunrise

Sunrise Warm amber rays Greet me with morning light Softly peeking through my window A welcome voyeur is this peeping Tom Who wakens me in time to hear sweet trilling of songbirds Plaudits to the Sunrise July 17, 2022 Radical Rictameter Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2022 6:59:00 AM

Love this, Jenna! A welcome voyeur is this peeping Tom - what a cool way to see this!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/5/2022 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Sunrise" is a beautiful write/picture. I wish I had the picture. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2022 1:03:00 PM

Thanks, Paula. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/5/2022 5:31:00 AM

Great imagery, great win. Congratulations Jenna! Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2022 5:33:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Linda.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2022 7:05:00 PM

this sure is lovely, Jenna. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2022 3:47:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I almost forgot I'd written for this contest.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 7/17/2022 8:35:00 PM

Yup, that seems what a rictameter ought to sound like, very nice read

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 3:37:00 PM

Hey Jeff. Thanks for your approving comments ;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/17/2022 12:42:00 PM

Such a beautiful sunrise piece Jenna matching with the image itself. Blessings always,Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2022 1:42:00 PM

Thanks for liking these lines, Gordon.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/17/2022 10:45:00 AM

A lovely time of day Jenna,even though I'm now retired I still wake early to great the morn. Tom PS, hope you didn't think it's me knocking your window lol

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2022 1:42:00 PM

It truly is, Tom. LOL Knock on my window and we'll share the sunrise.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/17/2022 8:53:00 AM

Another outstanding piece from the pen of Jenna Logan! I really like this. I also like how it is perfectly shaped, as it should be.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2022 10:42:00 AM

Thank you very much for both kind comments, Milt. I've never written in this form, but it was fun.