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Sunrise

the gentle arms of morning rise ~ lifting the gauzy shade of night Date: May 30, 2022 For: Morning Monoku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner Syllables verified on Howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 6/3/2022 1:26:00 PM
Reads like a very good contender to me. Way to go. It is so amazing to see the way a day or those days start and then once again to see the end. I appreciate your visit. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2022 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Sara~glad you enjoyed it! :)Paulette
Date: 6/2/2022 8:32:00 PM
Love both images, Paulette, especially the morning's. Good morning sunshine and blue skies, gw
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Date: 6/3/2022 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Gershon~there is nothing more beautiful to awaken to the gently rise of the sun, shedding light through the dawns light. :)Paulette
Date: 6/2/2022 2:26:00 PM
absolutely delightful Paulette cc
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Date: 6/2/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Jan~I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 6/1/2022 10:57:00 AM
Lovely piece of brevity penned here Paulette, hope all is well, blessings,Gordon
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/1/2022 11:14:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon~and I hope all is well with you also. :)Paulette
Date: 5/31/2022 9:44:00 AM
Nice entry for the contest, Paulette. Good luck! Bill
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Date: 6/1/2022 5:36:00 AM
Nothing like a magnificent sunrise to inspire! :)Paulette
Date: 5/30/2022 2:12:00 PM
Seeing the sunrise is a blessing. Every day a miracle. Well said.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 2:45:00 PM
Indeed! Thanks for stopping by to visit. Happy Memorial Day! :)Paulette
Date: 5/30/2022 10:09:00 AM
Ah, Paulette, I like this one a lot. I love the idea of letting in the light. I see a winner here.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Milton~glad you enjoy “Sunrise”….an amazing sight. :)Paulette
Date: 5/30/2022 10:02:00 AM
Love the metaphors Paulette, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Tom~glad you enjoyed the metaphors of “Sunrise”…. :)Paulette

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