Sunrise

“In all things of nature there is something of the marvelous.” Aristotle Mauve Skyline Wears a smile Blowing purple Kisses on golden Arc of blush horizon Where ruby dawn meets ocean As sun’s orange glow scintillates Flight of gallant eagle descending Upon blooming vibrant prairies of earth May 21, 2020 Placed 1st: Brian's Choice T Contest Placed 3rd: Etheree Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Jcb Brul

Date: 6/14/2020 11:32:00 AM

So lovely! Great imagery. A FAVE for me...!

Kenisha Shines

Date: 6/14/2020 9:38:00 AM

very beautiful poem.congratulations on your win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2020 9:39:00 AM

Much appreciate Kenisha--many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/12/2020 6:52:00 PM

Such vibrant words used, an Etheree is not an easy form but you wrote it masterfully, congrats on two wins, and 3 in top 100. This is a fantastic write Vijay, you are making your mark on this site!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:25:00 PM

That is so nice to hear--especially from you, John. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks for your supportive comments.

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/8/2020 8:06:00 PM

oh, what a captivating imagery you painted!..I love the" Ruby dawn meets ocean" . Congrats on your top win!! This absolutely a fave!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2020 12:34:00 PM

Much appreciate JCB--so very kind of you--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2020 4:40:00 PM

Great imagery in this ethree...I've not written one of these in such a long time. .I can see why it finished first .

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/1/2020 4:43:00 PM

Thank you, SO--much appreciate.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2020 8:53:00 AM

Hello Vjay Panidt, this is a beautiful sunrise. With beautiful colors. Enjoyyour day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/1/2020 3:47:00 PM

Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/29/2020 8:50:00 AM

I like the brilliance of this colourful write, Vijay:) it is so unique:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2020 11:00:00 AM

So very kind of you--much appreciate--many thanks, Jo.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/28/2020 1:20:00 PM

Again, your vibrant colours, gems and nature are woven to reveal a gem of a poem. So beautiful Vijay and congratulations. Blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2020 10:59:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Jennifer.

Constance La France

Date: 5/28/2020 10:50:00 AM

Vijay, very nice and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/29/2020 10:59:00 AM

Thank you Constance--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/27/2020 12:06:00 AM

Such a kaleidoscope of colour ~ so vivid it takes my breath away ~ this is so beautiful dear Vijay and congratulations on your well deserved wins my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/27/2020 3:05:00 PM

So very kind of you Ann--much appreciate.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 5/26/2020 7:12:00 AM

A great burst of colour, Vijay, and words perfectly timed. Good stuff.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2020 7:15:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/25/2020 4:37:00 PM

Back to wish you congratulations on your placement, a wonderful write-

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2020 7:14:00 AM

Thank you for the return visit, Michelle. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/25/2020 2:10:00 PM

I am wondering how I missed reading this beautiful poem of yours earlier! I love the way you have represented the images of nature through romance. "Mauve skyline", "blush horizon" beautiful soothing imagery. Happy to see it placed in the contest. Congratulations on your win Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/26/2020 7:14:00 AM

Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks.