Sunlight

Sunlight peeks through clouds Following a few days of dark An awakening Miniture clear Christmas tree lights Shine 'pon the pale pink running rose

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/27/2013 5:27:00 PM

A very nice poem to welcome the Christmas season! I enjoyed reading this one tonight! Really good work!...Thank you for the wonderful comments on my latest poem!

Donna Jones

Date: 11/19/2013 5:56:00 PM

Lovely picture painted Sara..hope all is well...

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2013 4:22:00 PM

Sunlight brings about an awe of power after there has been many days of dim days of grey and darkness...just like the inspiration of seeing the pale pink rose with Christmas tree lights nearby...such beauty infused within! I really enjoyed reading this exceptional poem this evening my friend! What a glorious piece, such a delight to read, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2013 4:19:00 PM

very nice. I think you are getting into the holiday spirit already.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/18/2013 12:25:00 PM

Lovely, Tanka, Sara. :) Christmas does give that beautiful and serene feel depicted in your poem! Hope all is well

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2013 8:31:00 AM

Very inspirational thought well penned, sara