Sunlight

Touched by th sunlight Warmth flooding my core Resurrected at first sight Longing for much more Warmth flooding my core Just to be very close, touched Longing for much more Already I'm blushed Warmth flooding my core Resurrected at first sight Just to be close, touched Touched by the sunlight

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Paul Easter

Date: 8/15/2009 10:15:00 AM

Love this poem one of my favs.

Shirin Neshat

Date: 8/7/2009 4:24:00 PM

Good writing.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 8/7/2009 3:27:00 AM

Wow! I was needing a pick me up this morning. Thanks for this wonderful write

Gareth Heslop

Date: 8/6/2009 3:19:00 PM

love this work...very beautiful

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 8/5/2009 12:45:00 PM

A good write thats setting is pure. and yes i do remember thanks for the comments

Margaret Okubo

Date: 8/5/2009 10:51:00 AM

This is so beautiful Sara. Indeed, truly inspirational. You did a great job with this form of poetry. Excellent. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Blessings, Margaret.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/5/2009 5:37:00 AM

Very good! Keep up the work.

Leanne Christian

Date: 8/5/2009 4:24:00 AM

a beautiful poem, to be touched by the sunlight is to be to be touched by God he gave us the sunlight so wonderful is his creation, thanks for your kind comments on my daughters poetry, she can only read and write simple text so I have to help with the feed back, she is strong in faith and will never be waiverd by anything, she is a great example to us here, she puts God first and says he is her best friend and that's all that matters, God bless you from diane

Brian Strand

Date: 8/5/2009 12:28:00 AM

Lovely writing Sara.Exceptional talent you display with this one.Rgds Brian

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 8/4/2009 5:02:00 PM

the lines come together very nicely at the end the way 'touched' appears twice back to back. Nicely done Sara:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2009 4:03:00 PM

Good evening Sara. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Thank you. Love, Carol

Jared Pickett

Date: 8/4/2009 11:46:00 AM

I have also written in this form..... "beginning the day with a Shovel and Broom"....I enjoyed reading your version, very good.... Pantoum is a difficult style to write, but you followed the strict meter well and flowed nicely.....AWESOME.....:JP]