Sunlight

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Grass With Sunlight Photograph by Neoblues - Fine Art America

("Sunlight on Grass" image courtesy of fineartamerica.com)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ sunlight does not leave its mark on the grass. we, too, pass silently

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/11/2024 7:59:00 AM

Thank you for this deep insight. Your poem has deep meanings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/11/2024 5:08:00 PM

awww, thank you Hilda. You're such an encouragement for me. Wishing you the best, hugs, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2024 6:43:00 AM

Yes, except a person remember us and tell our story again and again, we will be forgotten. There are a few people who go down in history but alas most are forgotten after a period of time. Thanks for sharing this thought-provoking work with us. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/11/2024 5:08:00 PM

I appreciate you sharing your thoughts, Sara K, and I agree with them. We all leave all mark in some way, shape or form. Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara B

Deb M

Date: 5/11/2024 1:48:00 AM

You have a way of making everything sound so magical and simply beautiful Sara! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/11/2024 4:28:00 AM

awww, thanks Deb. Your words are both kind and generous. Color me grateful. Hope you have a pleasant weekend, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2024 6:23:00 PM

Wow, comparing our passage on the grass to the sun's rays is just marvelous, dear Sara. Your muse is shining.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/11/2024 4:29:00 AM

thanks for your kind words, dear Sotto. My muse has been quite accommodating lately :-) Wishing you a wonderful weekend, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara