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Sunken Tears

He stood bravely before me with a medal of honor in his right hand and a bandage of agony around his left knee It seemed like he had struggled to stand, his crutches lay useless on the ground I found it hard to understand why, a soldier in pain didn't even frown With a voice firm but dry his words shook me like thunder "You're now the man of this house" he uttered like a worn-out hunter quivering up my legs like a terrified mouse Drowning my mind through cold ears he passed his sincere respect and sunken tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/9/2012 8:22:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Moi. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2012 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Carol, a very blessed weekend to you too... Moi

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